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Peace For Love

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Peace,
It's love
For love.
Peace,
Calms the world
For people.
Peace,
Slows the violence
For peacemakers.
Peace,
Shows the love
For people.
Peace,
Keeps your spirit calm
For kindness.
Peace,
Helps people live
Forever.
Written in grade 4. I just realized as I was typing it up that it is very spiritual.
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rhymesayer's avatar
Very simplistic in nature, and I'm not impying thats negative. I dont think it would have worked any other way. Sometimes padded wording can alter or diminish the meaning. beautiful, especially since you wrote this while in 4th grade. A lot of insight for being so young.